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Ewelina

To Adaś trochę przeszedł. Dobrze, że choć część ... jego osoby oszczędziłaś Wink

Ale teraz jest bardzo bogaty, choć nie wiem, czy to dało mu szczęście? W każdym razie ma fajnego syna i zonę. Choć, co przeżył, to jego Sad

Ale chyba jeszcze co nieco się wydarzyło, bo nadal widzę pewne luki w wydarzeniach ... co dalej? Co jeszcze?

Lidka

No dalej chyba dowiemy się, co przeżył na statku z tą dziwaczną darowaną mu załogą i jak w końcu spotkał się z żoną i dzieckiem.

O co chodzi w tym fragmencie:
"yet he couldn’t bring himself to trust the man."
konkretnie w takich fragmentach nigdy nie wiem, do kogo odnoszą się zaimki i to mnie gubi, także kim jest ten "he" - chodzi o Adama czy Mohammada, i o jakich ludzi chodzi? Very Happy

Rika

AMG

Rika

No dobra, używasz "mostly the words", które znamy Wink

Dawaj dalej! (To znaczy - czy mogę prosić o ciąg dalszy?)

AMG

No to dalej...

[...]

Some time after they woke on the ship, they heard some commotion from the port. Adam describes it all rather vaguely; anyway, they all met at some point in midst of the scuffle: Adam, Ahmed, John, Abisha, Eve. It turned out that Ahmed had not got rid of the woman and child in the usual ultimate way. He had just brought them to a white settlement – French, that’s why John speaks the language. After some years, already after Abdullah was gone, some unrest caused Abisha and John to be parted. Ahmed stayed with John, whom he had come to love as a son. For some reason, however, he still wouldn’t see himself as a part of the family but rather as a servant.

From that point on, John led a Nomadic life, acquiring probably more Arabic; then at some point he met Sarah and Eve, but lost the sight of Sarah in the scuffle in the port. Eve stayed with him.

Adam briefly told me how they nursed the injured John to health, put out to sea, then saw our fight with the pirates and helped out. Then he asked about home.

I’m sure I’ve told him some of the stories already a couple of times, but he doesn’t seem to be bored. He could listen to them for hours. He visibly can’t wait to get back home. It is, however, Ahava (she lets me call her so) who asks most questions. Her English is smooth, though the accent clearly foreign. I suspect she comes from somewhere in the Middle East, but I haven’t asked. I ask if John would like to hear it, but Adam supposes that Sarah and Eve are sharing the knowledge with him on the deck, anyway. Maybe tomorrow. He admits they are both still learning about each other, John having no recollection of his father, Adam having known him only as a baby. Abisha and Ahmed are a kind of bridges. Ahava is a truly remarkable woman, intelligent, warm, patient. Ahmed, as far as I can read him, has a soft spot for both Adam and John, and considers them his masters; he also treats Ahava rather warmly, especially for an Arab. Adam sees him as a friend, particularly because Ahmed saved his family, and he understands Ahmed had a tough life and nothing compelled him to change like he’s trying to change for Adam.

I want to see them home, on the Ponderosa, by the fireplace, at Pa’s side. The news of Adam’s death had cost him more than enough; he needs to get him back. We all need that.

Lidka

Mam nadzieję, że to jeszcze nie koniec i czeka nas długi opis podróży do Ponderosy, co?

AMG

Nie mieliby za bardzo co opisywać... "Płynęliśmy i płynęliśmy"?

Ewelina

Czy Ahava to to samo, co Abisha? Co z Johnem i Eve? Mam nadzieję, że będzie dalszy ciąg, niekoniecznie typu ... "Płynęliśmy i płynęliśmy..." Oni płynęli przez Ocean! Tę część można skrócić ... ale reszta?!

AMG

Ewelina

Chciałam się upewnić. Ale co dalej będzie?

AMG

Dalej? Może jeszcze jakiś wpis albo dwa... albo trzy...

Rika

Może być i cztery - fajnie się czyta Wink